Well done Babacar! You did excellent stories! Maybe next time you should look out for punctuation and read over you work so you haven’t missed anything.
The first one was meant to be the angry one and the second is the happy one like the second one said skipped past the defender and the angry one said runs faster than lighting.
Well done Babacar! You did excellent stories! Maybe next time you should look out for punctuation and read over you work so you haven’t missed anything.
Good work, but I have one complaint
IT’S
TOO
SHORT!
I like your story but I could not tell the difference between the moods in the first story and the second one.
The first one was meant to be the angry one and the second is the happy one like the second one said skipped past the defender and the angry one said runs faster than lighting.
One question why did you say in your first story running to catch the food? It’s good but if you can edit that then it would be perfect.