lucys tantrum

Posted on February 2, 2018 by Deleted User
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1 Response to lucys tantrum

  1. mcgim says:
    February 2, 2018 at 11:55 am

    The problem with your story is that you use she to many times in your piece. And next time try and punctuate your writing, but other than that I like it.

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