peacful and relaxing

4 Responses to peacful and relaxing

1. nestp says:

   November 22, 2017 at 1:38 pm

   che che i loved your poem so good
   i think you could do more adjectives and similes
   i could read this day to night
2. buchm says:

   November 22, 2017 at 1:45 pm

   That was really good Che,Next time maybe do some more adjectives but that was awesome
3. tobic says:

   November 22, 2017 at 1:59 pm

   that is a really good poem che i like it you did so well
4. kuper says:

   November 27, 2017 at 11:12 am

   Very good idea for a poem
   but I think you could use more adjectives
   still I think that you did use adjectives in a useful way

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