wow holly that is beyond amazing can you do it again prettyyy pleassse i loved that you used loads of adjectives and similes
i think maybe more of making me feel like i am there because i didn’t really feel like i was there!!
this is amazing i would totally by this if it was a book
Holly F, you did AMAZING! The poem really flowed.
I really liked your poem, but I think you could have put a bit of repetition or rhyme in it.
Even though you had no rhyme or repetition, your poem was still great and you did a really good job!
wow holly that is beyond amazing can you do it again prettyyy pleassse i loved that you used loads of adjectives and similes
i think maybe more of making me feel like i am there because i didn’t really feel like i was there!!
this is amazing i would totally by this if it was a book
Holly F, you did AMAZING! The poem really flowed.
I really liked your poem, but I think you could have put a bit of repetition or rhyme in it.
Even though you had no rhyme or repetition, your poem was still great and you did a really good job!
I really like how you had powerful adjectives
you could of some powerful verbs
i really liked that you had different words for each sentance