Well done Rachel, I enjoyed reading your poem it made me feel like I was actually there.
Some parts are repeated and the layout isn’t in verses.
You used great vocabulary.
Keep it up!
By your friend Ruby.
Thank you Ruby for writing what was good & being honest at what I could improve on . In truth I do not think my poem was very good.
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Well done Rachel, I enjoyed reading your poem it made me feel like I was actually there.
Some parts are repeated and the layout isn’t in verses.
You used great vocabulary.
Keep it up!
By your friend Ruby.
Thank you Ruby for writing what was good & being honest at what I could improve on . In truth I do not think my poem was very good.