Well Done Ammar! I loved your poem! It had a creative range of adjectives, your poem was brilliant!
In future to make it even better you could make your poem flow a tiny bit more.
This was a really great piece of writing and I advise you to carry on!
Wonderful vocabulary and layout
just remember to space your work out
I felt like I was there .
Well Done Ammar! I loved your poem! It had a creative range of adjectives, your poem was brilliant!
In future to make it even better you could make your poem flow a tiny bit more.
This was a really great piece of writing and I advise you to carry on!
I really like the way you made sens.
But yore lay out is a bit messed up.
I all so think the rhymes.