I think this poem about Ganga is really good . You used great adjectives. Next time maybe write a bit more about how it acts but other than that its great.
I love it Enzo, my faviate bit was were you talked about the family.
Next time try and use some rhyming words and more repetition.
But great work I also like how much detal you put in Enzo.
I think this poem about Ganga is really good . You used great adjectives. Next time maybe write a bit more about how it acts but other than that its great.
amazing it realy flows like the river itself
maybe next time you could include some more rhyming
it realy made me seem next to nature
I love it Enzo, my faviate bit was were you talked about the family.
Next time try and use some rhyming words and more repetition.
But great work I also like how much detal you put in Enzo.
Really good Enzo,
i think you could improve on making it rhyme
i love how it flows.