Amazing Jack! I really enjoyed your poem, it flowed well from the beginning till the end. Next time to make it even better (if that’s possible!) if you used a tiny bit more adjectives. I loved your poem and encourage you to do more!
This is great pom it describe a lot about the water. Next time try not to use the word Religous but other than that this is great
grate Poem Jack
next time poot maby one fall stop
I LOVED IT JACK !!!
By RUBY
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Amazing Jack! I really enjoyed your poem, it flowed well from the beginning till the end.
Next time to make it even better (if that’s possible!) if you used a tiny bit more adjectives.
I loved your poem and encourage you to do more!
This is great pom it describe a lot about the water. Next time try not to use the word Religous but other than that this is great
grate Poem Jack
next time poot maby one fall stop
I LOVED IT JACK !!!
By RUBY