Really good Louis, Next time you could improve on your spelling But i really liked how it rhymed.
well done louis that was a good presentation next time don’t forget to use capital letters but I realy liked the ending it made me think that I was in the scene
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Really good Louis,
Next time you could improve on your spelling
But i really liked how it rhymed.
well done louis that was a good presentation
next time don’t forget to use capital letters
but I realy liked the ending it made me think that I was in the scene