This poem is great Francesca it has a lot of description.
Maybe next time maybe not say this is Ganga so much but other than that its an amazing poem
Monique
Amazing poem Francesca great rhymes. How ever there is quite a lot of repetition so maybe next put in a little less of that.
Any way one of the best poems i’ve read so far great work.
Enzo
That was really cool Francesca,
Maybe you could do a little less repetition
Anyway,i love the way that it rhymes.
This poem is great Francesca it has a lot of description.
Maybe next time maybe not say this is Ganga so much but other than that its an amazing poem
Monique
Amazing poem Francesca great rhymes. How ever there is quite a lot of repetition so maybe next put in a little less of that.
Any way one of the best poems i’ve read so far great work.
Enzo
You did very good I like how you described the river but you can put more adjectives and I also like the words you used