I liked how you described the river but you can improve the adjectives in your writing and I also liked the words you were using
GOOD JOB!!! i liked how you rhymed maybe you could of added some repitison WELL DONE
I liked how you described the river and rebirth but next time add a bit more rhyming other then that it was amazing
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I liked how you described the river but you can improve the adjectives in your writing and I also liked the words you were using
GOOD JOB!!! i liked how you rhymed
maybe you could of added some repitison
WELL DONE
I liked how you described the river and rebirth
but next time add a bit more rhyming
other then that it was amazing