I like the way you have done rhyming & repetition like “lia is”.
Maybe next time you can use a bit more detail.
I also like way that you used good descriptive words.
I love this poem it realy felt like your sister was very close to you
I liked the rhyming but maybe some different features
A lovely poem about your sister
I like the way you have done rhyming & repetition like “lia is”.
Maybe next time you can use a bit more detail.
I also like way that you used good descriptive words.
I love this poem it realy felt like your sister was very close to you
I liked the rhyming but maybe some different features
A lovely poem about your sister
Great poem but next time maybe a bit more detail.
Love the rhymes great work
enzo