Lia is

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3 Responses to Lia is

  1. bygrm says:

    I like the way you have done rhyming & repetition like “lia is”.
    Maybe next time you can use a bit more detail.
    I also like way that you used good descriptive words.

  2. haywl says:

    I love this poem it realy felt like your sister was very close to you
    I liked the rhyming but maybe some different features
    A lovely poem about your sister

  3. EN says:

    Great poem but next time maybe a bit more detail.
    Love the rhymes great work
    enzo

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