Halloween spook

3 Responses to Halloween spook

1. beyae says:

   October 31, 2017 at 12:17 pm

   I liked it but i think you should have spaced it out from the 5 words you needed to do
2. pular says:

   October 31, 2017 at 12:22 pm

   To Abira

   I like your story but maybe when you say ‘everybody on the streets were vanished’ you could take away the ‘were’ and make it ‘everybody on the streets vanished’ it would make a little bit more sense.
3. beyae says:

   October 31, 2017 at 12:29 pm

   To Abira,

   I really like you imaginative story, but I don’t think you should have actually done the ‘n’ at the end.

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