It is a great story but you should check on your spelling in some places and add the word flame also you should replace 2 with two and the wolf scene doesn’t really make sense. but overall its great!!
Your story is amazing all of it was sweet and scary but two words were stuck together ‘thereby’ you could separate those words to make it ‘there by’ other than that its amazing
It is a great story but you should check on your spelling in some places and add the word flame also you should replace 2 with two and the wolf scene doesn’t really make sense. but overall its great!!
Excellent work ! but I would recommend adding more full stops.
To Alex O
Your story is amazing all of it was sweet and scary but two words were stuck together ‘thereby’ you could separate those words to make it ‘there by’ other than that its amazing