I really liked this story including the tense when the girls tern the corner. Next time remember to punctuate your sentences properly because some of it did not make sense. Other than that it was a great story!
Personally i think it would be an amazing story if you adjusted some parts to make them make sense.
To Alaa
Its really scary but really great and heartbreaking I hope you keep doing an amazing story telling job.
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I really liked this story including the tense when the girls tern the corner. Next time remember to punctuate your sentences properly because some of it did not make sense. Other than that it was a great story!
Personally i think it would be an amazing story if you adjusted some parts to make them make sense.
To Alaa
Its really scary but really great and heartbreaking I hope you keep doing an amazing story telling job.