Your story is amazing really entertaining and it makes me want to see more.
The story is really great and suspenseful at the same time. Problem is that you should put a comma next time to make it sense. Does the hydra save the village or is it someone else? I was good, I would look at it again.
the story is good but none of it really makes sense all you need to do is make a few changes and it will be great !
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Your story is amazing really entertaining and it makes me want to see more.
The story is really great and suspenseful at the same time. Problem is that you should put a comma next time to make it sense. Does the hydra save the village or is it someone else? I was good, I would look at it again.
the story is good but none of it really makes sense all you need to do is make a few changes and it will be great !