It made sense but you didn’t involve that much punctuation. I don’t think the fireworks part make sense because I don’t think no one will get that. You should put so between fireworks and I because so more people would get it. I liked the fireworks bit though. You need a lot of improvement
It made sense but you didn’t involve that much punctuation. I don’t think the fireworks part make sense because I don’t think no one will get that. You should put so between fireworks and I because so more people would get it. I liked the fireworks bit though. You need a lot of improvement
To Rico,
your work docent make sence