100WC SIAN 18-11-12

4 Responses to 100WC SIAN 18-11-12

1. edelpozolagnea.206 says:

   December 6, 2012 at 6:20 pm

   I really liked the way you started this piece of writing, straight into the action. Keep checking punctuation though! Ms del Pozo
2. consi says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:35 am

   I loved your ending, although your text is lacking speech marks, overall it is great, the ending, great! But the speech marks are a mistake, please do correct that next time!
   consi 😛
3. hurrl says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:37 am

   It was a nice piece of writing but you should check your punctuation.
   And never start with BANG! BANG! BANG! 🙂 🙂 🙂
4. guemb says:

   January 14, 2013 at 5:08 pm

   I love it Sian.
   Like Ms Del Pozo said please check punctuation.
   But I really liked it though!
   I like the last paragraph.
   Boutheyna.

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