Good idea for this prompt. Next time try to use pronouns (she, her) to avoid repeating Fizy so many times. Ms del Pozo
we really liked your poem and its very good
This story was very good, and it had a good lay out as well but you cept saying Fizzy but apart from that it was good.
i really liked it but dont use fizzy as much and make sure that you put the right word peace-piece
I like it. It would be good if you used pronouns. Really good!
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Good idea for this prompt. Next time try to use pronouns (she, her) to avoid repeating Fizy so many times. Ms del Pozo
we really liked your poem and its very good
This story was very good, and it had a good lay out as well but you cept saying Fizzy but apart from that it was good.
i really liked it but dont use fizzy as much and make sure that you put the right word
peace-piece
I like it.
It would be good if you used pronouns.
Really good!