sian 100wc week 10

8 Responses to sian 100wc week 10

1. edelpozolagnea.206 says:

   December 6, 2012 at 6:19 pm

   You are absolutely right, bullies have ususally been bullied too. Please don’t forget to check punctuation. Ms del Pozo
2. mattj says:

   January 11, 2013 at 11:26 am

   Please check your puntuations,but it’s BRILLIANT…………Jessica/Greta
3. clarm says:

   January 11, 2013 at 11:29 am

   I really enjoyed your work,it was good of you to admit it.
   Keep up the good work!

   Mia
4. hurrl says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:28 am

   You have made some really good points but there are some spelling/grammar mistakes;
   i-I,
   meanly unstable?

   This is a great piece of work but I don’t really find it interesting to read.
5. ollac says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:29 am

   that was brillant sian very good lay out but keep your eye on your puntuation!
6. armse says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:29 am

   I really liked your peace of work it was brilliant but i think you could of added a bit more detail.
7. badid says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:55 am

   it wa BRILIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SIAN
8. guemb says:

   January 17, 2013 at 5:57 pm

   i liked very much Sian.
   Just check punctuation and that wouls make it brilliant!!! 🙂

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