It takes some courage to speak up when you are being bullied, well done! Check your last sentence, what did you really wanted to say? Ms del Pozo
that was very good advice Paige & Helin
I really enjoyed your writing. I liked the way you described how you feel when you get bullied. I think you need to add a few more commas in your work.
well done we enjoyed your writing it was really interesting… from fiz and zahira
Well done Samiha. I love everything in your work. Just some mistake. Lovely work = Good Writer! 🙂
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It takes some courage to speak up when you are being bullied, well done! Check your last sentence, what did you really wanted to say? Ms del Pozo
that was very good advice Paige & Helin
I really enjoyed your writing. I liked the way you described how you feel when you get bullied. I think you need to add a few more commas in your work.
well done we enjoyed your writing it was really interesting… from fiz and zahira
Well done Samiha.
I love everything in your work.
Just some mistake.
Lovely work = Good Writer! 🙂