Good but you missed out some words and you spelt weird wrong. You should have checked over your work before you posted it as it doesn’t really make sense but apart from that it good.
Mae
I liked this piece of writing, I like how you said the shape changes every one minute although, some of the sentences didn’t make sense but still gave it a good try.
Good but you missed out some words and you spelt weird wrong. You should have checked over your work before you posted it as it doesn’t really make sense but apart from that it good.
Mae
I liked this piece of writing, I like how you said the shape changes every one minute although, some of the sentences didn’t make sense but still gave it a good try.