It’s good you just need to use a different pronoun than ‘he’ Everything else was great.
Great story and really funny. I like how you made it funny and I think to make it better you could’ve done more adjectives
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It’s good you just need to use a different pronoun than ‘he’ Everything else was great.
Great story and really funny. I like how you made it funny and I think to make it better you could’ve done more adjectives