Well done Amy but your spelling is wrong.
WELL DONE Amy I like your poem so much but there was a mistake because you forgot to leave a space between those and homes.
From Archie
We really liked the poem, we especially liked these two lines; ” does it dry up or suffer in pain”,” or do the masters fester in shame”. But you could change the end of your 2nd to last end of the poem to ” scared” not” scares”
From Charlie. C and Jack
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Well done Amy but your spelling is wrong.
WELL DONE Amy I like your poem so much but there was a mistake because you forgot to leave a space between those and homes.
From Archie
We really liked the poem, we especially liked these two lines; ” does it dry up or suffer in pain”,” or do the masters fester in shame”. But you could change the end of your 2nd to last end of the poem to ” scared” not” scares”
From Charlie. C and Jack