That was amazing I love the bit ” Does it disappear into the air.” Although you could of improved in the last two lines. Mae and Brian
WELL DONE Layla that was BRILLIANT! The only you could improve on is to keep your righting brilliant throughout and don’t die out near the end.
From Archie
Thank you Archie and I will try to improve
Liban
I like it. Its very spicy.
I really like your rhyming well done
Great poem Layla! I love the bit “Does it burn into a powerful flare” Make sure you check through your work because you’ve made a few mistakes! A amazing poem! Ruby
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That was amazing I love the bit ” Does it disappear into the air.”
Although you could of improved in the last two lines.
Mae and Brian
WELL DONE Layla that was BRILLIANT! The only you could improve on is to keep your righting brilliant throughout and don’t die out near the end.
From Archie
Thank you Archie and I will try to improve
Liban
I like it. Its very spicy.
I really like your rhyming well done
Great poem Layla! I love the bit “Does it burn into a powerful flare” Make sure you check through your work because you’ve made a few mistakes! A amazing poem!
Ruby