Wow Ruby. This is fantastic! Alanis’s favorite bit was “Does it burn to cinders like coal on a flame? Does it die like a life- a death in the rain” Well done!
I like the way you used your similes and in one of them its rhymes so that is very good. your poem is fantastic. Toby and Kirin
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Wow Ruby. This is fantastic! Alanis’s favorite bit was “Does it burn to cinders
like coal on a flame?
Does it die like a life-
a death in the rain” Well done!
I like the way you used your similes and in one of them its rhymes so that is very good. your poem is fantastic.
Toby and Kirin