Amazing Ted and Zak however on the last line it says “Like the last leave before winter” when it’s supposed to say “Like the last leaf before winter but the bit i liked is like a cookie held to hard
This is a really good poem guys!!!! The description was fantastic and Jessica’s favorite bit was ” maybe it just flattens like a ran over stray” and I thought it was brilliant to, and mine ( jasmine’s) favorite bit was ” does it pop like when touching a bubble” That was very good !!
well done!!!!!
Amazing Ted and Zak however on the last line it says “Like the last leave before winter” when it’s supposed to say “Like the last leaf before winter but the bit i liked is like a cookie held to hard
This is a really good poem guys!!!! The description was fantastic and Jessica’s favorite bit was ” maybe it just flattens like a ran over stray” and I thought it was brilliant to, and mine ( jasmine’s) favorite bit was ” does it pop like when touching a bubble” That was very good !!
well done!!!!!