A great counter, yet it needs to flow and has no closing statement. You have also missed other social points you made in class.
You expressed your opinion through your writing without using the letter ‘I’. Try extending your writing and expanding your ideas.
Great counter! Maybe you could have extended your piece of writing and added a rhetorical question.
:] great counter Sam you have expressed your opinion through your writing without putting the letter ‘I’. Try and put a social skills.
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A great counter, yet it needs to flow and has no closing statement. You have also missed other social points you made in class.
You expressed your opinion through your writing without using the letter ‘I’. Try extending your writing and expanding your ideas.
Great counter! Maybe you could have extended your piece of writing and added a rhetorical question.
:] great counter Sam you have expressed your opinion through your writing without putting the letter ‘I’. Try and put a social skills.
from Freddie