Good vocabulary, Nice use of language and overall really well. You king make the opposing side a little stronger it needs to be, but good piece of work. 🙂
Natalie this is SO good! You really captured August and the way he feels. This has ,hands down, convinced be to be on the side of August being home schooled! It ‘s very good but remember to stick to one point for more time and then counter it. Is this what you really believe?
Amazing, really really convincing and your rhetorical questions are really strong, you also used a variety of sentence openers. You really put your point across and I believe August should be home schooled after reading your argument.
I like how you opened with a strong rhetorical question and you used various sentence starters
Good vocabulary, Nice use of language and overall really well. You king make the opposing side a little stronger it needs to be, but good piece of work. 🙂
Natalie this is SO good! You really captured August and the way he feels. This has ,hands down, convinced be to be on the side of August being home schooled! It ‘s very good but remember to stick to one point for more time and then counter it. Is this what you really believe?
Amazing, really really convincing and your rhetorical questions are really strong, you also used a variety of sentence openers. You really put your point across and I believe August should be home schooled after reading your argument.