Wow! This is so powerful and has really interested me into how home schooling really effects children. However being home schooled is not necessarily painful and full of agony. Do you really think he has to go to school considering he knows so much already?
Ruby
You almost – ALMOST – convinced me that August shouldn’t be home schooled, your arguments were so powerful. Everything linked together perfectly, and I loved all your rhetorical questions! Only thing was… The second sentence in the second paragraph doesn’t really make sense as a sentence on its own, and, again, I don’t really think being home schooled would bring pain and agony. But, other than that, amazing! Do you really believe August should go to school?
Strong piece of work, could do some work about the cage part i did understand what you were trying to say, but good work though. 😉
Wow! This is so powerful and has really interested me into how home schooling really effects children. However being home schooled is not necessarily painful and full of agony. Do you really think he has to go to school considering he knows so much already?
Ruby
You almost – ALMOST – convinced me that August shouldn’t be home schooled, your arguments were so powerful. Everything linked together perfectly, and I loved all your rhetorical questions! Only thing was… The second sentence in the second paragraph doesn’t really make sense as a sentence on its own, and, again, I don’t really think being home schooled would bring pain and agony. But, other than that, amazing! Do you really believe August should go to school?