In some of the sentences you could
have made it better like on the first
sentence you wrote-I should have thought before…
to make that better you could write
I really should have clearly thought it through
before I did it. Other than that you did really well.
good work who ever you are I would make it a 10/10 next time please write your name
Good work Dea, but try to use commas and make sure you use the right homophone, e.g. Their should be there.
I rate you 100/100!
In some of the sentences you could
have made it better like on the first
sentence you wrote-I should have thought before…
to make that better you could write
I really should have clearly thought it through
before I did it. Other than that you did really well.