I thought it was really good but instead of using it hurts you could write the pain slowly moving through me like a shiver running down my spine
you don’t put full stops in poems
I can imagine a dark story in my head which is very good the only thing is that you are using the same words and I think you spelled Beep wrong.
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I thought it was really good but instead of using it hurts you could write the pain slowly moving through me like a shiver running down my spine
you don’t put full stops in poems
I can imagine a dark story in my head which is very good the only thing is that you are using the same words and I think you spelled Beep wrong.