Good try at writing a diary entry from Leonards perspective, you have thought carefully about how he would have felt about Alex. I like the simile you have used to show how angry Leonard felt towards him. Make sure you try and use different sentence openers so your writing doesn’t become repetitive.
Good try at writing a diary entry from Leonards perspective, you have thought carefully about how he would have felt about Alex. I like the simile you have used to show how angry Leonard felt towards him. Make sure you try and use different sentence openers so your writing doesn’t become repetitive.
Great diary entry,I liked how you described how angry Lenard was when Alex punched him in the face 🙂 🙂