Leonards diary, Alex

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  1. mshuttleworth says:

    Good diary entry, you have justified why Leonard hated Alex well. Make sure you re read your work to check that you have included all the correct pieces of punctuation. What punctuation is missing from this sentence? ‘He took MY Grandad and Lia why can’t he just get his own friends he’s probably too scared to go outside to meet others not even Sophie plays with me anymore he’s the big deal in this family.’

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