Great use of vocabulary Martim, Your suspense is really good, although it would be better if you used a full stop or ellipsis at the end.
Vincent and Sumayyah
Great use of vocab and suspense but next time use adverbs at the start of the sentences .Also show not tell for even more suspense. Over all good job.
The text is very good.Sentences have met very well.You have done an excellent job.
I really like this poem. It grabbed the readers attention and is really good.
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Great use of vocabulary Martim,
Your suspense is really good,
although it would be better if you used a full stop or ellipsis at the end.
Vincent and Sumayyah
Great use of vocab and suspense but next time use adverbs at the start of the sentences .Also show not tell for even more suspense. Over all good job.
The text is very good.Sentences have met very well.You have done an excellent job.
I really like this poem. It grabbed the readers attention and is really good.