Great but why is it all capital letter?
Wow that has a really good cliff hanger I want to read more!
Brilliant work I love your descriptions but maybe put in some more commas.
This piece of work was brilliant it really leaves the readers on a cliff hanger.You could of added more information about what you felt like when you were alone. E.G.-i felt like i was isolated. good job :]
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Great but why is it all capital letter?
Wow that has a really good cliff hanger I want to read more!
Brilliant work I love your descriptions but maybe put in some more commas.
This piece of work was brilliant it really leaves the readers on a cliff hanger.You could of added more information about what you felt like when you were alone. E.G.-i felt like i was isolated. good job :]