Great similes In your title make sure its in CAPS.
Nice work Skye, Great use of smiles, but don’t put capital letters in the middle of your sentences, and use gaps in your poem.
Vincent and Sumayyah
You cant ruin the suspense by telling us about the wolf . Make sure you go over your poem because in some parts it doesn’t make any sense. Stick to one tense or it will confuse the reader.
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Great similes
In your title make sure its in CAPS.
Nice work Skye,
Great use of smiles,
but don’t put capital letters in the middle of your sentences,
and use gaps in your poem.
Vincent and Sumayyah
You cant ruin the suspense by telling us about the wolf .
Make sure you go over your poem because in some parts it doesn’t make any sense.
Stick to one tense or it will confuse the reader.