The Mad scientist

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4 Responses to The Mad scientist

  1. Ronnie_ says:

    WOW That was powerful
    Next time punctuate properly.

  2. harus says:

    WOW!! Your work blew me away. Next time, make sure you put in any full stops or commas so the reader can take breaths. So far there is only 1 full stop.

  3. Cheekymonkey10 says:

    You have wrote ‘I shivered in fear hear,hear’ I think you should change that and maybe add some punctuation(full stops and commas.)

  4. lingl says:

    Great piece of writing, I really liked reading this I think you should use ellipses at the end …

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