WOW That was powerful Next time punctuate properly.
WOW!! Your work blew me away. Next time, make sure you put in any full stops or commas so the reader can take breaths. So far there is only 1 full stop.
You have wrote ‘I shivered in fear hear,hear’ I think you should change that and maybe add some punctuation(full stops and commas.)
Great piece of writing, I really liked reading this I think you should use ellipses at the end …
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WOW That was powerful
Next time punctuate properly.
WOW!! Your work blew me away. Next time, make sure you put in any full stops or commas so the reader can take breaths. So far there is only 1 full stop.
You have wrote ‘I shivered in fear hear,hear’ I think you should change that and maybe add some punctuation(full stops and commas.)
Great piece of writing, I really liked reading this I think you should use ellipses at the end …