Good suspense and rhymes! Remember to check your last line it doesn’t make sense
Well done with the breakings of the line. But don’t rhyme it because it loses the suspense.
In a suspense poem we don’t use a lot of rhyming words. You don’t need to say ‘I heard a CRASH’ I screamed!!! You could say ‘CRASH!’ Then next line ‘I screamed, Agghhhh!!
There is not really any suspense in there. I think you should add more.
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Good suspense and rhymes! Remember to check your last line it doesn’t make sense
Well done with the breakings of the line.
But don’t rhyme it because it loses the suspense.
In a suspense poem we don’t use a lot of rhyming words. You don’t need to say ‘I heard a CRASH’ I screamed!!! You could say ‘CRASH!’ Then next line ‘I screamed, Agghhhh!!
There is not really any suspense in there. I think you should add more.