Very Interesting poem Ronnie! Sounds like you know a lot about suspense! Remember to stick to I or He, not both.
The beginning of your lines go diagonally. I love your suspense though.
I really love your suspence Ronnie! When you say two red eyes you don’t use the number ‘2’ you use the word two.
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Very Interesting poem Ronnie! Sounds like you know a lot about suspense! Remember to stick to I or He, not both.
The beginning of your lines go diagonally. I love your suspense though.
I really love your suspence Ronnie! When you say two red eyes you don’t use the number ‘2’ you use the word two.