RONNIE SUSPENSE

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3 Responses to RONNIE SUSPENSE

  1. Melody 4 says:

    Very Interesting poem Ronnie! Sounds like you know a lot about suspense! Remember to stick to I or He, not both.

  2. Cheekymonkey10 says:

    The beginning of your lines go diagonally. I love your suspense though.

  3. harus says:

    I really love your suspence Ronnie! When you say two red eyes you don’t use the number ‘2’ you use the word two.

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