Chloie your work blew me out of the class room. You could use more horrifying description it was very powerfull
Great poem chloie I really enjoyed it.
Next time make sure you read over and put each piece of speech on a different line.
Wow! Good ideas, and I loved your cliff hanger. It was also humorous. Remember to use proper verses 😉
You also don’t need a full stop.
Fantastic poem Chloie! Next time try to read over your work. When you wrote ‘No, I think it was three’ you missed out a space. If you saw that then it would be brilliant.
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Chloie your work blew me out of the class room. You could use more horrifying description it was very powerfull
Great poem chloie I really enjoyed it.
Next time make sure you read over and put each piece of speech on a different line.
Wow! Good ideas, and I loved your cliff hanger. It was also humorous. Remember to use proper verses 😉
You also don’t need a full stop.
Fantastic poem Chloie! Next time try to read over your work. When you wrote ‘No, I think it was three’ you missed out a space. If you saw that then it would be brilliant.