In a poem you lay it out in a column. Instead of saying goosebumps appeared, you could say goosebumps and the next line. Other than that it is brilliant!
You need to change your lay out to make it look more like a poem than a paragraph.
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In a poem you lay it out in a column. Instead of saying goosebumps appeared, you could say goosebumps and the next line. Other than that it is brilliant!
You need to change your lay out to make it look more like a poem than a paragraph.