You need to use appropriate titles and remember your name needs a CAPITAL LETTER!!!!! – What adverb could describe how you ran into the church?
Nice, but more then one ellipsis makes you lose suspense.
You need to use more capital letters.
I was enjoying it. I want to know more about it but make sure that you have re read your work. It was 10/10
Don’t use more than one ellipsis and remember to use capital letters. Describe how he ran into the church.
Well done I really liked the metaphor “My brain was a storm of thoughts”But remember too many ellipsis makes you lose suspense.
You are a person who knows their metaphors they were my favourite , this Is the best blog I’ve ever read your sentences are amazing.
Great describing words and metaphors. I really liked when it said ‘my brain was a storm thoughts’.
In my opinion there was no suspense. There was too much …If you stop with the dot dot it would of been really good
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You need to use appropriate titles and remember your name needs a CAPITAL LETTER!!!!! – What adverb could describe how you ran into the church?
Nice, but more then one ellipsis makes you lose suspense.
You need to use more capital letters.
I was enjoying it. I want to know more about it but make sure that you have re read your work. It was 10/10
Don’t use more than one ellipsis and remember to use capital letters. Describe how he ran into the church.
Well done I really liked the metaphor “My brain was a storm of thoughts”But remember too many ellipsis makes you lose suspense.
You are a person who knows their metaphors they were my favourite , this Is the best blog I’ve ever read your sentences are amazing.
Great describing words and metaphors. I really liked when it said ‘my brain was a storm thoughts’.
In my opinion there was no suspense. There was too much …If you stop with the dot dot it would of been really good