Great blog Saskia! I loved your openings e.g: feverishly, steadily ect. Your short sentences at the end really built suspense and left me wanting to know more. The only thing that was wrong was your spellings like for example Iarnt and pped. Apart from that this is a great piece of writing. 😉 Ruby
Lovely Saskia,You did not use many I , my and it openers. I really liked the opening steadily. You have made a mistake at the fast line , You could use strangely.
Great blog Saskia! I loved your openings e.g: feverishly, steadily ect. Your short sentences at the end really built suspense and left me wanting to know more. The only thing that was wrong was your spellings like for example Iarnt and pped. Apart from that this is a great piece of writing. 😉 Ruby
Lovely Saskia,You did not use many I , my and it openers. I really liked the opening steadily. You have made a mistake at the fast line , You could use strangely.