The quite church

3 Responses to The quite church

1. ghosj says:

   November 24, 2015 at 11:42 am

   I wonder how high Mr shuttle worth can shout it was hilarious fantastic use of language.
2. whyta says:

   November 24, 2015 at 11:53 am

   I really liked the part when it said ‘louder then Mr Shuttleworth’s shout’, but you could add shorter sentences to make impact.
3. Orpa says:

   November 30, 2015 at 12:33 pm

   Love the part about Mr Shuttleworth. The punctuation could do better. Amazing work 🙂

   From your friend Orpa

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