Pirate By Naomi

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5 Responses to Pirate By Naomi

  1. dobbo says:

    very good but the ending just stops anyway really good:):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

  2. aliz says:

    That is just awesome you speak in pirate language and no spelling mistakes this is just number 1 a pirate with a brother in the same ship your mind is brilliant I want to read looks of this and I hope you make more stories about pirates I give it 10 out of 10.

  3. clarf045.206 says:

    Great Work! Really like how you tried to make the head pirate speak like actual pirates did! And when you added humour in when you forgot to say special treasure! No mistakes I could see! Well Done!! 🙂

  4. scars says:

    Really good but you repeated the special treasure a bit too much. Overall very good.

  5. lincd says:

    I like how you but me instead of my

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