Wow! This is really great Olivia 🙂 But the beginning didn’t quite make sense to me “Every person in the world I dead in seconds” Overall Its really good xx
‘I dead in seconds’ don’t make sense. Its a good moral, but to us it dosnt really make sense. We only realised at the end that it was about phones, tablet ect.
xX Sam + Ellie Xx
Wow! This is really great Olivia 🙂 But the beginning didn’t quite make sense to me “Every person in the world I dead in seconds” Overall Its really good xx
0-0 OliviaD that is really scary! But I love it. Its amazing well done♥
from OliviaT♥
‘I dead in seconds’ don’t make sense. Its a good moral, but to us it dosnt really make sense. We only realised at the end that it was about phones, tablet ect.
xX Sam + Ellie Xx
This don’t make sense especially the begging but I like the way you put a moral at the end :):):):):)
Its like your an android but some of it don’t make sense but good work.
I want to hear more. 🙂