The Forbidden Forest by Dan T

5 Responses to The Forbidden Forest by Dan T

1. aliz says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:06 pm

   Amazing but you should you more stops but still well done.
2. olly says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:07 pm

   Nice Story, I got a little confused when you wrote”They Were Nothing But Skeletons and A Little Bit Of Gold”
   Overall, Great Story And Detail!! 😀
3. haywb says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:08 pm

   I love the plot. I would like to know how they got there. 🙂
   • thomd says:

     April 24, 2015 at 1:17 pm

     thanks Ill work on that 🙂
4. clarf045.206 says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:13 pm

   Good! But some of it doesn’t really make much sense e.g. the found the X mark the spot and you also said 3 adventures I am guessing you mean adventurers! Anyway Good Work!!!

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