Great atmosphere description. You used the line x marks the spot really well. The last line really leaves you hanging.
Great atmosphere and description. You used the line x marks the spot really well. The last line really leaves you hanging.
Wow it leaves me on a cliff hanger, I love it!
that was good but a massive cliff hanger at the end
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Great atmosphere description. You used the line x marks the spot really well. The last line really leaves you hanging.
Great atmosphere and description. You used the line x marks the spot really well. The last line really leaves you hanging.
Wow it leaves me on a cliff hanger, I love it!
that was good but a massive cliff hanger at the end