really good 😉
Hahaha I liked the way you said ‘I felt like a pirate so I screamed.’ I also liked the way you ended it by saying ‘After I found my treasure, Im glad I woke up in a jungle.’
Really like it and the main plot is good but I would like a bit more description at the end as it leaves me wanting to read more! Otherwise Great!!!
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really good 😉
Hahaha I liked the way you said ‘I felt like a pirate so I screamed.’ I also liked the way you ended it by saying ‘After I found my treasure, Im glad I woke up in a jungle.’
Really like it and the main plot is good but I would like a bit more description at the end as it leaves me wanting to read more! Otherwise Great!!!